Easter Day
“Finally Easter`s
Here, That Means Easter Egg Hunt!” yelled Emily
Sprinting down the stairs
step by step, she stuffed her face with toast. She searched under her bed, and
in her wardrobe she looked high and low. Out of the corner of her eyes she
spotted her art box, so she slowly walked to her art box and peaked inside “HORRAY”
she cried “ I FOUND ONE.” After 20
minutes of searching she saw gold foil
under the chair she found another one. An hour went by then she finally gave
up. Out of know where her dog approached her with a bell in his mouth. She knew
her dog ate her easter eggs.
Great opening girls. Great use of alliteration and your choice of verbs is excellent. Remember your punctuation at the end of your sentences, including speech. The spelling of know is for things you know or knew. (nowhere)
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