One stormy night in GTA, Franklin went out for an egg
hunt with Michael and Trevor. They
hopped cautiously in the bright pink Bugatti Vayron, to find the alien Easter
Egg, it was somewhere in the forest. They saw the sign saying ‘Dangourous
Place!’ They strolled into the deep, dark forest and all they could see was
darkness. Consequently they could not find the egg because it was pitch black.
They had a choice, die or survive by finding the egg. Suddenly, a spark of
light appeared 50 metres away. The egg was right infront of them in the bushes,
but as they approached…
Good cliff hanger boys, you have set the scene as a dark and scary place and I predict a dark and gloomy ending for the three characters. Excellent punctuation.
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