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Friday, 25 April 2014

Harry

One misty morning it was Easter Sunday, I got up and got dressed to go outside to play , all of a sudden I saw a colourful Easter egg. So I went over to investigate the egg. I thought to myself what could this be? So I went inside to get a magnifying glass to have a closer look, however I couldn’t find the egg when I came back, so I said to myself “How bizarre!”  I turned around and saw a huge dragon and legged it inside and hid under my bed.  Suddenly, I heard a smash … 
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown26 April 2014 at 01:43

    Fantastic Harry, great control of punctuation and some great descriptive words. Good verb choices in 'legged it' and 'investigate'

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  2. Rachael harris (Team 100)27 April 2014 at 08:26

    I love the detailed descriptions, followed by a quick verb "legged it", which is exactly what I would have done in your shoes! great work Harry!

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