Hi, I’m Meg the
marvellous magpie, have you ever looked at something shimmering and think ‘OMG
I want it so badly!’ Well that’s happening to me, there’s this egg on the
inside of the window sill and the people that live there have gone on holiday
(yes!) I have a plan. Gliding gracefully through the letter box I use my beak
senses to track down my precious and make it be MINE!
I soar straight for
the window sill however it isn’t there! I’m searching up, down, left, right and
centre but I can’t find the egg …
Finally I give up. What a shame!
Good punctuation, alliteration and descriptive language girls.
ReplyDeleteBe careful with your tense girls (looked and think - past tense would be looked and thought)