One gloomy day my mum sent me to
granddad Dave’s farm. When it was dinner I heard granddad talking about someone
called Guss Guss on the phone. After dinner I went round the back of the farm and
in the barn there were weird symbols on a cupboard. When I opened the cupboard there
was a monster that looked like a black hair ball, it was the scariest thing I
have ever seen. Suddenly the door flung open, it was granddad Dave. I had to go
and hide but Guss Guss has escaped! What was I to do? Two weeks later Guss Guss
had destroyed half of America.
The world is doomed!
James, Some very good description e.g gloomy day, the door flung open. I was intrigued by weird symbols on the cupboard but I would have used something other than a monster in the cupboard e.g something I had never seen before.
ReplyDeleteWell done and scary ending. Mrs. Weeks