One frightening night I, Olivia, was left alone at home
whilst my parents went to hospital. The next morning as I went down the
clackety stairs. I noticed mum and dad still hadn’t come home and my little
sister Sally stated crying “I want mummy and daddy!”
“I’m sorry Sally but they can’t come yet.” Then my sister
said she was hungry so I went to the huge kitchen to get us both breakfast.
However, when I came back to the lounge she was outside. “Sally! Come back here
now!” I screamed “6 year olds do not leave the house without permission or an
adult.”
“Sorry!” Sally exclaimed. That night, as I put sally to sleep, the phone rang so I went to get it. On my way I noticed a tapping in the
cupboard …and when I opened the
cupboard door …a hand reached out to me …
Jafna, some good use of vocabulary. I would like to have known what happened to your parents and why they went to hospital rather than a hand reaching from a cupboard. Check your proper nouns, what do they need? Mrs. Weeks (like the name of your sister... ha ha)
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