Swiftly, clinging on for dear life, we sailed through
scorching sky below the orange sun. The cool breeze was as welcoming as a log
fire on a winter’s morning. Grasping the ebony fuzz, I squealed deafeningly as,
my loyal friend the giant bee, cackling with laughter dived screaming down,
cutting through the air like a knife. Suddenly he stopped millimetres above the
Pacific Ocean hovering in mid-air. Finally
recovering from the ‘attempted
murder’ I lowered my hand to the
water and felt the calm
salty water against my skin as his white lace like wings fluttered
rapidly under the sun.
i like the word fuzz
ReplyDeleteHi Heather and Emmanuel,
ReplyDeleteThis was an extremely clever and powerful piece of writing. Your level of description was outstanding. You started sentences in interesting ways and used some very advanced vocabulary.
Keep up the great work!