One scary evening I heard a loud crash
“ahhh” I screamed in fear. Suddenly, I heard it again and followed the noise as
it was beckoning down the hall. It led me to a dark, dingy room.
When I slowly slipped my thin body in
to the gap of the creepy door, there it was ... a plain strip of paper lying on
the dusty damp grey floor surrounded by bright beautiful paints and pastels. I
glanced at the plain paper I started to draw a house and then something
happened, I ran to the door to get mum ...
Hello Kelly and Jessica,
ReplyDeleteWell done on entering the 100wc. You have used some really great vocabulary in your entry. I like 'slipped your thin body into the gap' and 'beckoning down the hall'. There help to give your entry a creepy, sinister feel.I'm not sure why you would have begun to draw a house if you were feeling so scared though.
Keep up the great work and entering the 100wc
Mrs W - Team 100wc
Flamborough, East Yorkshire, England