3 LITTLE GRIM REAPERS!!!!
One beautiful sunny day 3 little grim reapers went off to
build their house. One little grim reaper went to build his house of mud. The
second little grim reaper went to build his house of out of leaves. And the
third and final grim reaper built his house out of metal. And then a robot came
and crushed the house made of mud down. So the little grim reaper rant to the other
house made of leaves but that one was destroyed to! But the robot could not
destroy the house made of metal though so in the end they shot down the robot!
Very clever to change the characters but keep the same plot. Check the house of leaves is 'but' the best word to use. It sounds like the house was destroyed before the Robot arrived.
ReplyDeleteBoys, I enjoyed reading your alternative ending/version of the Three Little Pigs. This is the first 100 word challenge that I have read where the actual characters have also been changed so well done! I would recommend that you think about your spelling and punctuation for your next story.
ReplyDeleteI hope that you enjoyed writing this challenge.
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