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Friday, 7 March 2014

snow white and the ugly step brothers by Cydni and kelly


Once upon there was 3 ugly step –brothers called Louie, Luke and Thomas they were evil and horrible to snow white and she dreamt of becoming a queen. One night her dream came true she finally walked into her dream and saw magical things like a king and got married but no that did not happen yet, what actually happened is her evil step-brother and watched her get married to a prince called Prince Albert. He remarked that they can have a marriage party so snow white did and all her brothers were so jealous that they moved away. 

 

 
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  1. Unknown8 March 2014 at 00:38

    Make sure you re-read your work girls, there are some words missing or incorrect which spoils the flow of the story. Make sure Snow White is written with capitals as it is a proper noun.

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