Humpty Dumpty
“Yo
I’m Humpty Dumpty, and I’m going to tell you about my story.”
I
sat on a brick hard wall suddenly he fell off. SMASH! I cracked open. All the
kings’ horses and all the kings men hurried over, they muttered
“Mmmmm
lets have him for breakfast.”
They
placed me in the royal fridge; I knew I had to act fast, I got some yellow
butter and smothered my hands in it, next I used it as glue and stuck myself
together, I opened the fridge and ran through the palace as well as out into
the open.
What a clever idea Eva. I really liked your nursery rhyme and was pleased you managed to escape. When writing in the first person you don't need inverted commas (speech marks) when you are talking to the reader. Also check you use I rather than he.
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