Sleeping beauty
One stormy night there lived a king called Henry and
a queen called Sophia. they had always wanted a baby girl. so they got one. She
was called aurora. Suddenly tow witches came! One of them said that she will
prick her finger and die by the age of
thirty! But the second witch said that you will then awaken and sleep for 1000
years. The king and queen didn’t care so when she was thirty she priked her
finger and slept for a thousand years. (she even slept in heaven)
The end
Capitals for beginning of sentences and names Mayeda. Also try to use higher level connectives e.g. however instead of but. Use your targets.
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