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Friday, 7 March 2014

snow white and the seven dwarfs by Tina


Snow white

And the seven dwarfs

Once upon a time (last Wednesday), there lived a beautiful princess called Snow white. Unfortunately, Snow white was neglected by her evil stepmother, the queen.

One day, Snow White was picking apples in the forest when, all of a sudden, a little petite cottage appeared ahead of her.

Skipping enthusiastically, she headed to the cottage to see if anyone was home. It turned out no one was but by now she was very warn out so she decided to rest in the house .

Snow white ended up resting in Dopey’s bed.

3 hours later       

“Get out my house you lousy trespasser!”Bellowed dopey

Snow white was never seen again.

Please note: no princesses were harmed during the writing of this story

 

2 comments:

  1. A great mix of fairy tales Tina. Some fantastic word choices as well. You have written a very humorous account, I love (last Wednesday and no princesses were harmed...)

    You warn someone of danger. On a Friday I feel worn out!

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  2. Hannah Apperley Team 100WC8 March 2014 at 12:03

    What an original 100 word challenge! It made me laugh! I wonder if we will ever see Snow White again.

    I really like how you have used the adverb 'enthusiastically' in your story, it really helps your reader to picture what is going on in your story.

    Well done and thank you for sharing.

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