LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD!
Little red
riding hood set of with her delicious cake, but instead of walking in the woods
to her grandmas, she walked along the winding road to the....
Most
beautiful park in the whole wide world.When little red RIDING HOOD ARRIVED AT
THE BEAUTIFUL PARK, SHE SAT DOWN AND STARTED TO TALK TO A HANDSOME LITTLE BOY,
WHO SHE HAD MET AT SCHOOL.THE HANDSOME LITTLE BOY’S NAME WAS BEN,HOWEVER BEN
HAD TO LEAVE EARLY THERFORE LITTLE RED
RIDING HOOD SAT ON THE FLOOR AND CRYED,STUFFING
HER FACE WITH THE DELICIOUS CAKE.
THE END
I thought this was going to be Little Red Riding Hood's happy ending but nevermind...at least she had something nice to eat! Some great adjective and verb word choices. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Millie and Lana
ReplyDeleteThis is such a different and intriguing take on this week's prompt and what an unusual direction you've gone with the story. Your beginning to your story is very good and we're lulled into that false sense of security that Red Riding Hood is heading off to her grandmas with a lovely cake but surprise, surprise she turns off for the park where she doesn't meet a wolf but a little boy who she knows from school. Well done, even though the end was a little bit sad, it's a great remix of the traditional Red Riding Story.
Ms O'Keeffe (team 100wc)
Ireland