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Friday, 14 March 2014

Toy Force by Emad

IT was a stormy night and it was extremely BORING! She hated this day like every day. Suddenly the bell was ringing so she strolled to the door 
"AAAAAaaahhhh! It’s the world’s evilest villain DOOMMAKER!" Why would he come here?  HE gave a box but when she lifted the lid BOOM! A killing robot came out bursting with flames destroying everything WHAT WILL SHE DO? Is it the End?
NO it wasn’t, taking the batteries out in this mission will be extremely hard so she threw a knife at it and quickly got the batteries out and the killing robot is NO MORE.       


1 comment:

  1. i'ts kinda good but i felt like your missing something right at the start! keep looking!

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