Cinderella and
the seven dwarfs.
Once
upon a time Cinderella was dressed in
,rags cleaning the floor so you see her masters reflection. She had to feed the
seven dwarfs their pudding, before they go of to the mine. The master had been
talking about a ball. But Cinderella over heard out of the blue a magic light
appeared and it was talking saying you will go to the ball child. Then a lady appeared her name was Sally don’t be
afraid and out with her wand a swish and I was wearing a navy blue dress.
Your
carriage awaits child…
An exciting time for Cinderella awaits. Check were you have placed your commas, when you read your story is this where you pause? Also decide whether to write in the past of present tense and stick to it.
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