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Friday, 14 March 2014

DEATH COMES UPON US! BY KELLY AND JESSICA

DEATH COMES UPON US!
CRASH,BANG,BOOM we heard a noise it was coming from outside in the bins. Kelly, my wonderful sister and I, Jessica, rushed down stairs and saw Emma, our mum, and our older sister Kerry who we hated.
“What was that noise?” we asked politely
Our Mum said, “Why don’t you look for yourself?”                                         

So we did but when we lifted the lid it was Kerry, but we don’t know how she got in there, we tried to get her out but she would not let us. All of a sudden she sadly passed out. 

1 comment:

  1. Oh my, that was quite a story. What was Kerry stuck in? Why did she not want out? Why did she pass away? I was surprised and sad that a sister, even one you did not like, had to die; a tragic ending!
    Keep up with the creative writing, girls.
    Mrs. Middleton
    Team 100WC
    Surrey, B.C., Canada

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