I was
dressed and ready for school. I got in the car and mum started to drive when
she saw a magpie; mum then told us not to look because it’s bad luck but I
looked any way and said “it’s just a saying.”
We arrived
at my school when I told my little brother Kenny to hurry up or I’d call him a turtle. Suddenly I tripped on the pavement not realizing my friends had
been waving. I walked into my brothers class to see my mum with an orange peel in her mouth!
“Funny!” said Kenny.
A clever way of ending to include all of the words and to show how unlucky it was to look at the Magpie.
ReplyDeleteNext time check your speech punctuation.
I was dressed and ready for school. I got in the car and mum started to drive when she saw a magpie; mum then told us not to look because it’s bad luck but I looked any way and said “It’s just a saying.”
ReplyDeleteWe arrived at my school when I told my little brother Kenny to hurry up or I’d call him a turtle. Suddenly I tripped on the pavement not realizing my friends had been waving. I walked into my brothers class to see my mum with an orange peel in her mouth!
“Funny!” said Kenny.