I couldn’t
belive it! I was flying over London, the wonderful London (well it looked
better up high.)Soon I’ll be flying in Maldives. “Hey I just flew over France,
aurevoir France!”I shouted waving on stop. A little while later I saw Switzerland.
Looking down I was surprised to see my basket.
You have covered a lot of ground in 100 words Jafna. I'm suprised you only just saw your basket!
ReplyDeleteNext time think about describing a place using lots of adjectives and similes.
Hot air balloon by Jafna
ReplyDeleteI couldn’t belive it! I was flying over London, the buetiful London (well it looked better up high.)Soon I’ll be flying in Maldives. “Hey I just flew over France, aurevoir France!”I shouted waving non stop. A little while later I saw Switzerland. Looking down I was surprised to see my basket falling down out of the sky,"aaaaaaaagggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!"I screamed,there was a pool of blood every where...
Hot air balloon by Jafna
ReplyDeleteI couldn’t belive it! I was flying over London, the beautiful London (well it looked better up high.)Soon I’ll be flying in Maldives. “Hey I just flew over France, aurevoir France!”I shouted waving non stop. A little while later I saw Switzerland. Looking down I was surprised to see my basket falling down from where we were 20 feet high."aaaaaaaaaaggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed there was a giant thud.a pool of blood was every where... I'm no longer living if you see me your flying high and your about to die...