One glorious day, I happened to see a
strange, orange, Aardvark
He looked very jolly as he said to
his friend,
“Hello,” with a smile across his face
“fancy seeing you here.”
The cool, purple, tortoise waved to say hi
He ran swiftly along the pavement and gave Mr Aardvark a hug.
This seemed rather funny but I was
very confused!
They always seem to exaggerate how
slow they all are.
They went to the park,
They went to the shops,
They had lots of fun just playing around.
Well done for getting all of the words in Heather. I really like the opening and middle but perhaps the ending could be re drafted as it seems rushed.
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