“Can I tell
you something?” Explained Susan.
“Can you
tell me?” Whispered Sally, the ghost.
“I was sitting there on my bed and fell
asleep.” Said Susan.
“Tell me
more” said the ghost.
“It was funny but scary at the same time I’m
scared to tell do you really want to know?” Said Susan.
“Yeah”
“Well this
is how it started” I was laying there and I pictured an orange on the table I picked up and munched it. Then I went for a
walk down the pavement , then I saw
a Tortiouse Then I saw my mum she waved at me!
How strange! Telling a ghost about a nightmare you have had! Well done for getting all five words in. Next time make sure you punctuate before the closing speech mark.
ReplyDeleteHello Kelly and Jessica,
ReplyDeleteWell done on entering the 100wc. I find these word prompts harder to do but you've worked together, which makes it even harder. It is strange that you are telling a ghost about your dream - a little like Casper maybe. Try to make sure that your said verbs are not in capitals.
Keep up the great work and entering the 100wc
Mrs W - Team 100wc
Flamborough, East Yorkshire, England
I like your story when it says ;it was funny and scary at the same time;. Well done
ReplyDelete“Can I tell you something?” Explained Susan shaking in fear.
ReplyDelete“Can you tell me?” Whispered Sally, the ghost you dont have to be scared.
“I was sitting there on my bed and fell asleep.” Said Susan with her eyes froze open.
“Tell me more” said the ghost i promise not to tell.
“It was funny but scary at the same time I’m scared to tell do you really want to know?” Said Susan strugling to go on.
“Yeah”please wisperd sally.
“Well this is how it started” I was laying there and I pictured an orange on the table I picked up and munched it. Then I went for a walk down the pavement , then I saw a Tortiouse trying to eat the orange i dont know why.My mum walked in and took the orange and the Tortiouse she said to me dont look affraid he wont hurt you,i think hahaha,. Thats when i noticed my mum was posesed what should i do...