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Friday 4 October 2013

Toitoise Land by Eva


Deep down below the wistful blue sea a funny orange blob with scaly legs, so strong it could carry its own shell, could be seen in an underwater shop buying fried seafood. [If you couldn’t guess what the thing was it was a tortoise.] Anyway carrying on, swimming gently over the massive city Mick the tortoise came to a stop.
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  1. Unknown4 October 2013 at 13:09

    Good start Eva and great complex sentence to start. I would like you to comment below with the ending which should include the words 'pavement' and 'waved'

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  2. Anonymous22 November 2013 at 02:13

    Deep down below the wistful blue sea a funny orange blob with scaly legs, so strong it could carry its own shell, could be seen in an underwater shop buying fried seafood. [If you couldn’t guess what the thing was it was a tortoise.] Anyway carrying on, swimming gently over the massive city Mick the tortoise came to a stop.He saw his friend Jack and waved,Mick slowly simmed to him and they walked down the pavement towards dawn.

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