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Friday, 4 October 2013

The Weird Story by Joseph and Maison


One baking hot day, at Thorpe Park there was an annoying orange, darting down the sidewalk to go on the fabulous turtle ride. There was an hour long queue, so he decided to waddle around. He saw a ride called the cranium shaker, he jumped on it before he went back to the queue for the exciting turtle ride. The queue was still 10 minutes. So he went for some funny bubble gum ice cream. Once he had finished his ice cream, he went on the turtle ride. His mother was waving at him but as soon as he got to the top SPLAT!

 

 

 
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  1. Unknown4 October 2013 at 12:59

    Whoops! Mr Orange should have worn a suitable seat belt. Well done for getting all five words into your work as well as some good adjectives.

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