I am Amelia Gnut and this is not funny at all.
I had no family left. Nobody except my turtle Burt.
As they escorted me to my new family I
screamed,”NOOO! I will not go! I won’t leave them there alone!”
In the end I was forced into it because there was
nowhere else to go. I started living with the Orange family, but I wasn’t going to stay there for long. I escaped
that night, but as I ran along the pavement
something strange started to happen. I felt the trees stare at me, they whispered
in my ears.”Run...RUN AWAY!” I sprinted into the darkness of the woods and saw
Burt, cowering behind the bushes. I looked forward and I saw a girl, floating
in the air. She waved at me, her
head tilted to the side. Then she widened her mouth and...
Excellent 100WC again Millie. Well done for getting all five words into your writing. Excellent speech punctuation and description of the scene.
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