High above
the cotton clouds I spied on the wonders around me. My muscular Dad with hair
as sharp as a nail point was with me. My Dad made sure the huge thing that kept
us up was not about to burn plus so it was steady.Looking down I was surprised
to see that we were in Japan there was the most humongous building...
Great use of alliteration and simile Eva. I'm keen to find out more about what you could see. Maybe you could add a comment to let us know?
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