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Friday 4 October 2013

The Annoying Orange


One day there was a little tiny orange turtle and he met a minion and they became best buddies.

The next day they played a game called minion scoot and they got there scooters out.

After that Jerry was being stupid then he got run over and went to the hospital.  
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  1. Unknown4 October 2013 at 13:12

    Well done on getting two of the key words into your story and good time connectives in 'next' and 'after'

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