On
the night of New Years Eve, in the deadness of the night, the ghastly dreaded
monster seeks a friend to haunt for life.
It
searches in the forest, it searches in the wood, it searches in the places that
you never thought it could.
When
you’re tucked up in your bed
Fast asleep at night it drags itself into your
Dreams
and messes with your head.
You’re
dreaming of a monster, you’re dreaming of the night, you dream that you’re
dying fast and getting closer to the light.
Finally
you wake up and you’re living with the dead.
Excellent use of deliberate repetition and good adjectives.
ReplyDeleteHello, thank you for your 100WC entry, I really enjoyed reading it and liked how you wrote it as a poem. You described what the monster did well but it would be nice for some descriptive language to describe what the monster looks like.
ReplyDeleteI loved the ending that tells you that your dead and the fact you wrote it in the form of a poem.
ReplyDeleteit was a very good poem
ReplyDeletefrom mary mac lairy
New Years Eve by Tina
ReplyDeleteOn the night of New Years Eve, in the deadness of the night, the ghastly dreaded monster seeks a friend to haunt for life.
It searches in the forest, it searches in the wood, it searches in the places that you never thought it could.
When you’re tucked up in your bed
Fast asleep at night
it drags itself into your dreams and messes with your head.
You’re dreaming of a monster, you’re dreaming of the night, you dream that you’re dying fast and getting closer to the light.
Finally you wake up and you’re living with the dead.
in your dream you recall that the monster said
evade me , suffer and see a hospital bed.