One spooky night in Tokyo, Japan a
humongous earthquake shook the earth while a tsunami destroyed the biggest
company in Tokyo! The earthquake had made a colossal crack in the mighty earth
that lead down to the earth’s core. It forced a deadly toxin that shot through
the earth’s crust that wiped out 5% of the earth’s population!
The devastation was
horrible children came out side coffin up blood and having elegist to the
toxins.
i like your font and style of writing
ReplyDeleteGreat description James, Excellent punctuation as well. Good alliteration with colossal crack.
ReplyDeleteYour final paragraph has a couple of spelling mistakes (coffin) coughing and (elegist) allergies?
James,
ReplyDeleteI loved this 100WC. The idea behind was interesting, thought-provoking and original. You also used your 100 words effectively and description to add to your writing. Just be careful on typos. Emily, Team100