A jungle is noise,
like the beat of the drums, it’s peaceful like the sound of a flute .it’s crazy
like the scream of a child. It rains a lot all you see is water. Its wild like a drop of a
symbol. With all the wondrous creatures it’s like a key of a piano. Its roomy
like the sound of an eco eco
eco, its cosy like a huge from
a bear. Its interesting like a drop of a pin. Its natures like the blow of a trumpet.Its a jungle how fun can it
be!
spelling - hug from a bear.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea to write a poem Mary but you need to start a new line for each section. Also check your punctuation - it is = it's
I love this, Mary. Well done you! So may WOW words make an easily imaginable world of wonder. Doing a poem was a clever idea - proper structure and punctuation might make it even better. Reading the piece out loud can make all the difference to see how it sounds.
ReplyDeletei love the poem
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