One spooky evening
in BLACK HEATH there was some moaning, deep waily moaning. All of a sudden a
hand was pushing through the earth. Subsequently a zombie appeared READY
TO RANSACK THE EARTH.
THE NEXT DAY A FAMILY CAME TO PICNIC THERE, WHEN
A SWARM OF ZOMBIES WITH THE PLAUGE KIDNAPPED THEM. They nearly bit them but instead
they buried them alive. There was nothing anyone could do... doctors came to
try and fix the problem when all of a sudden a doctor came and found out that
tese were actually fake zombies and so they were arrested.
Thank goodness for that! I thought we had a zombie invasion round the corner! Do you know why it's called 'Blackheath'?
ReplyDeleteCheck your punctuation, especially towards the end, as you have missed some out.