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Friday, 14 February 2014

The Evil Penguins by Millie.s


The Evil Penguins

Meetings were held across the country to find an answer to what happened to poor Margo Odon last Tuesday. She was reported missing and now there is a humongous crowd of Evil Penguins searching for her because they need a queen. Penguin life is weird.

The Evil Penguins are now heading downtown with the unfortunate girl in the menacing clutches of their flippers. We have let out a crazed Penguin Killer to solve our Evil Penguin problems but... Oh dear. He seems to have killed Margo Odon! Well... now the Evil Penguins have killed the Penguin killer... we’re doomed.

10 Hours later

The Evil Penguins took over the world.

1 comment:

  1. What a clever story, well written with lots of little 'twists' to your plot. I love the opening sentence, it was an imaginative way to use the prompt. I wonder what would happen if penguins really did take over the world? I enjoyed reading this, well done Jane Team 100WC Barnsley UK

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