KIDZ MEETING
Once there were 12 children who were prime
ministers. They wanted to have a meeting about having phones in class rooms but
using them for the right stuff. So they went to the white house for a meeting
about it.
The children wanted to make a point
about children having phones in class the meetings were held across the country
to find an answer the meeting on for two whole days they even got to stay in a
hotel for free.
Soon after they made a diction. to make it
possible for children to use phones in the class room.
Punctuation is a must, otherwise it becomes very difficult to read. Your second paragraph looks like one sentence!
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