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Friday, 28 February 2014

Space Invaders by Millie S

One joyful day a trio of friends went for a walk down to the beach. They were named Ted, Star and Aimee and they were always cheerful until...
In the morning everybody woke up and started a day with a bowl of weeto’s, ready to have some fun. As usual, they all met up on the beach. Ted got there first. But what he didn’t know was that the beach was closed due to a paralyzed alien invader.
“What are you?” he asked while walking up to the invader
Slowly, the alien rose up, and sucked out his brains...
Everybody cried when the grave digger was pushing through the earth getting ready to bury Ted...


2 comments:

  1. A very imaginative account on this week's challenge. Excellent control through out.

    Check 'weeto's' do you need the apostrophe? I think it should be Weetos.

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  2. Ms Maddison, Ireland (Team 100WC)3 March 2014 at 01:32

    Great work, Millie, I enjoyed your 100WC! It was a gruesome end for poor Ted, great idea for a story, keep up the good work :)

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