One day a little boy
went out in the garden. He shut the kitchen door with his newly made key. He
placed it near a tree when suddenly the key disappeared! Well not really, it
went down a hole, a mole hole. Now the little boy was very clever and thought
of an idea straight away, but for this situation he couldn’t even think. So he
sat next to the tree and finally thought
of something.dig like a mole. So he dug.
Pushing through the earth he found it! It was kind of dirty so he
went home and cleand it
Well done Mayeda, good description at the beginning with little and newly. Try to use more adjectives and adverbs. Excellent use of commas, well done.
ReplyDeleteJust check you start every sentence with a capital and spelling of cleaned.