One thunderous night a girl called
Kelly was being evacuated from her home in London. Kelly was scared because the earth was
disintegrating and everything was blowing down, there was a rocket that was going into outer space and was going
to land on Saturn. She was crying because it was her birthday and it was
destroyed and that made her very upset.
Sadly she said “ I want to go home “ .
You can’t go home because there is no
home any more her mum said to here”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO KELLY SHOUTED REALLY
LOUD I WHAT ABOUT MY DOG...”
This started really well girls, the Earth being destroyed and the hope of being evacuated to a different planet.
ReplyDeleteMake sure of your speech marks around the words the mum said.
Also make sure you use the prompt in your work.
Thanks for your 100WC story - I really liked the opening sentence as it me think a lot about what might be still to come.
ReplyDeleteRead over your story and check your storyline and remember to include the prompt 'pushing through the earth'
Keep up your writing
John C
Australia