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Friday 28 February 2014

Us and Earth by Tanya and Jamie


Hi, Me and my friend Jay are big Earth geeks all we care about is Earth. On the news it said that on 23 February 2034 the Earth is going to spilt in half because of an alien trying to eat its way eat from the middle of the Earth.
Everyone has to fly up to space to be safe.Every second off the day people can feel the alien pushing through the Earth. Everyone is worried  about where we are going to live after Earth is destroyed by the alien.will we ever save the world  




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  1. Mrs. E1 March 2014 at 02:15

    Tanya and Jamie,

    What an interesting story. I can't imagine that we wouldn't have an Earth anymore. Be sure to re-read your writing to make sure there are capitals and periods so your reader knows when they can stop.

    Mrs. E (100 WC team)

    Canada

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  2. Mrs. Parisi - Team 1002 March 2014 at 13:08

    I can just imagine how scared everyone was waiting for the alien to push through the earth. You wrote a very scary story! Keep up the good work!

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