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Friday, 28 February 2014

One Summer by Lana, Antoine and Tareeq

One scorching summer afternoon Jason decided to look for gold with his new metal detector that he got for his birthday he was hoping so bad that he would find some gold and become RICH. Then he could buy a limo and he would even have enough for his own mansion. After two hours of searching for gold his mum called him in for dinner, he had pizza and chips tonight. Next after dinner he snuck out at night while everyone was sleeping. And started pushing through the earth with a metal shovel. Suddenly he was super RICH      
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  1. Anonymous2 March 2014 at 13:31

    You pack a lot of detail into a short piece! I love the happy ending and the fact that he had pizza and chips and that they gave him the strength to continue his search!
    Congratulations on a great team effort and I am going to have pizza soon myself! (Mrs Avis Team 100 WC)

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