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Friday 7 February 2014

The underwater city by Millie S

Henrietta Inractic lived with her parents unhappily until that horrible day...
After the great yodelling fair of 1956 Henrietta set off back to her home in Sertion but one thing she didn’t know would ruin her life forever.  Her mother had sneaked out of the house with her daughter’s money and when Henrietta walked in mum locked all the doors.
“Hey! Let me out!” shouted Henrietta.
Her mum sniggered while dashing away to the nearest shoe shop. On her way a man was bellowing “IT’S THE END OF OUR WOOORLD!!!”
Nobody believed him.

Back with Henrietta water started flooding everything. All she could see was water...
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  1. Anonymous9 February 2014 at 04:29

    Good story Millie but there is some spelling errors.

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