One spooky the military were making a man made weapon of mased
distructon and one day it broke lose and made evry and anything turn into a
zombie and there was only one that could free man kind and he battled until he
had unfortunately died from a plane out of the black sky. But a hour later he
survived and cept fighting.
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Lovely ideas James but you must read your work and ensure your punctuation is accurate. Full stops, commas are a must.
ReplyDeleteI think I have to agree with the above comment. It is really important that you check for spelling, punctuation and missing words before you click post. Mrs Maclean, Team 100WC
ReplyDeleteOne spooky night the military were making a man made weapon of mased distructon and one day it broke lose, and made evry and anything turn into a zombie and there was only one that could free man kind called dark shadow. He battled until he had unfortunately died from a plane out of the black sky. But a hour later he survived and cept fighting. And never stopped fighting for man kind.
ReplyDeleteOne spooky night, the military were making a man made weapon of mased distructon. Suddenly one day it broke lose! It made everything and anything turn into a zombie and there was only one Zombie that could free man kind - Dark Shadow. He battled feriously until he unfortunately died from a plane shooting him out of the gloomy black sky. But a hour later he survived and kept fighting, because Zomies cannot die. After he never stopped fighting for man kind.
ReplyDeleteneed to put commas in there james by mason.p
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