Fiona
Wellington, who had the job of a banker, was in a relationship with Alex Daster.
She loved her life, but every day she wished she could do better; she tried
today.
An
elderly woman came in and politely asked, “Can I have an extension on my house
payment?” being the kind person she is, she wanted to say yes but her job was
on the line. ”I’m sorry but your extension has been denied; there is nothing I
can do.”
“I will be back!” she screamed, “I will be
back!”
Later,
in the parking lot, Fiona spotted the woman staring at her. She started
screaming and running towards Fiona, Viciously attacked her and ripped off her
welly chanting “I curse thee!” she handed the welly back and vanished in thin
air.
Fantastic writing and use of complex sentences, speech punctuation and use of semi colons. Try to link your work with the prompt more next time.
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