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Friday 8 November 2013

Treasure Hunt by James

One foggy night I found an old treasure map hidden in the deep, dark loft. I was amazed at the crumbly, old treasure map that was lying in the stacked high boxes. When I picked it up there was a humongous x on the River Thames. The next day I went to river Thames and I went in the heart of the river, I dived in the river, suddenly I saw a glinting box I gently opened and WAM!! There was a beautiful glint of treasure.        


1 comment:

  1. Great use of adjectives James and what a find! Think carefully about your punctuation of your second to last sentence.

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