One misty night a
man who i once met decades ago came to my door step and he knew we were
watching him so we made a plane to get revenge for the way he had treated us
...later that evening it was 1:19 one good
minute until are exquisite plan would work
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Excellent just one little drop of venomous blood
and he will be our FOREVER. HE WILL OBAY OUR EVRY WORD AND REGRET HE EVER MESET
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A little confusing girls, I think the man you were watching came into your home for you to carry out your plan. It would be helpful to stay that you tricked him into your house.
ReplyDeleteCareful with our/are. Also laugh, messed, every
I agree with Mr Haylock girl. I got a bit confused with some aspects. I like the scary pictures though!
ReplyDeletewell done girls great story I love it from Jamie and Harry
ReplyDeletelovely writing girls. just a bit confusing on the writing but keep it up!!!
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One misty night a man who I once met decades ago came to my door step and he knew we were watching him. We made a plan to get revenge for the way he had treated us. Later that evening it was 1:19 just one minute until our scary plan would work.
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Excellent just one little drop of venomous blood and he will be ours FOREVER. HE WILL OBAY OUR EVRY WORD AND REGRET HE EVER MESSED WITH US! (EVIL LAUGHTH)
One misty night, a man who I met decades ago came to my doorstep and he knew we were watching him. We made a plan to get revenge for the way he had treated us... when it turned 1:19 there was only one good minute until our exquisite plan would work...
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Excellent, just one little drop of venomous blood and he will be ours FOREVER! HE WILL OBEY OUR EVERY WORD AND REGRET HE EVER MESSED WITH US! (EVIL LAUGH)
you could do better spelling and punctuation but the storyline was really great!