One stormy day a young man went for a walk in the woods with
his bow and arrows and eventually got to the perfect hunting ground and set up
camp. Then he went hunting for food he pulled his bow out and WHOOSH the arrow
shot the moose in the eye.
‘"Some meat for
dinner tonight" said the man.
It was turning night he was being very cautious of wolfs and WHOOSH a wolf was ripping his shirt then he
pulled his secret weapon his sword. Blood splattered every where he
ran back and had dinner. The next day all they saw was his boots!
Very gory boys but a good story about how he ended up in the water. Next time make sure you read your own work to include commas.
ReplyDeleteHi Maison and Emad
ReplyDeleteI agree that your story is a little bit gory, which was quite interesting, I particularly like the description of the blood splattering. I liked the setting that you have created, and the character reminded me a little bit of Robin Hood.
Keep writing!
Miss T team 100wc
One stormy day, a young man went for a walk in the woods with his bow and arrows. Eventually ,we got to the perfect hunting ground and set up camp. Then he went hunting for food he pulled his bow out and WHOOSH the arrow shot the moose in the eye.
ReplyDelete‘"Some meat for dinner tonight" said the man.
It was turning into nighttime, he was being very cautious of wolfs and WHOOSH a wolf was ripping his shirt then he pulled his secret weapon his sword. Blood splattered every where he ran back and had dinner. The next day all they saw was his boots!