One day a
war between Pearl Harbour was made into a world war. Things got tough for
America, things got crazy like a hell hound prison. Thousands of people died in
the war and only a couple of people survived. That’s why we have Remembrance
Day every year on the same day when the war ended. It is sad for a family to
die but sometimes you have to sacrifice your love ones for the people of the
country. Tens of thousands of families died during those years, now they will
have eternal life and will never be forgotten.
Very wise words from someone so young James. Well done. Think about how you could change your opening. Maybe something like "After the bombing of Pearl Harbour things got extremely tough for America"
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