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Friday 29 November 2013

Get me out of here! By Maison


Hurry up we need to get out of here,

 

I sprint to the woods as the creature runs after me I scream in horror then a person runs out in front of me as he said stop I’m on your team follow me so i run to a cottage and hide  in there for a night then all of a sudden

 

 
I ran and ran in till I see my home I see the light of the street, bang behind me it gulps everything in its way then I realised wait I have got super powers now its my turn...
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown29 November 2013 at 12:09

    Great ideas Maison, and all you need is to use full stops and speech marks to show when a character speaks.

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  2. Anonymous6 December 2013 at 02:22

    Hi it's heather make sure you use punctuation when needed amazing suspence what happens next?

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  3. Anonymous6 December 2013 at 02:25

    Hurry up we need to get out of here,





    I sprint to the woods as the creature runs after me I scream in horror. then a person runs out in front of me as he said stop I’m on your team follow me so i run to a cottage and hide in there for a night. then all of a sudden...






    I ran and ran in till I see my home I see the light of the street. bang behind me it gulps everything in its way then. I realised wait I have got super powers now its my turn...

    ReplyDelete

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