As
I hopped through the graveyard with my one good leg I started to remember how I
got there, trying to die.
I
remembered that I was taking a walk with my little sister Elise, picking
prestigious poppies for the soldiers. Suddenly we’re surrounded by them, two
different teams, waiting to fire.
“RUN!”
I shouted to her, but she was frozen with fear, I didn’t know how to help. Soon
it was too late, she was lying dead on the ground and I was shot in the leg. The
surgeons came to save me. As soon as I was allowed out I went straight to the
graveyard and here I am now, about to hang myself.
Hello,
Elise.
A very dark and sad ending Millie. Great punctuation throughout and excellent use of alliteration. Maybe try for a happier account next time. Aim to make me laugh and smile!
ReplyDeleteOh Millie, what a sad account you have given us this week in the challenge! You describe well losing your sister and heading to the graveyard to join her. This makes the final two words so poignant - well done!
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