Emmanuel went fishing and caught a strange fish and it
nearly bit him. The eyes of the fish were mysterious and it looked like a shark
with huge eyes, sharp teeth and a slimy skin. It had a weird tale pink skin
black eyes with a dot.
Hello Emmanuel, I enjoyed this challenge because you have described the strange fish so well, excellent adjective choice and a simile also. Well done, keep writing!
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Where did you find that word mysterious from? Lovely description of the fish, well done Emmanuel.
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I'd love to have heard what happened next. I like the way you've described the strange fish. Mrs. Weeks
ReplyDeleteGreat use of a simile Emmanuel 'looked like a shark'. Also fantastic use of adjectives (strange, mysterious, huge, sharp, slimy, weird )
ReplyDeleteHello Emmanuel, I enjoyed this challenge because you have described the strange fish so well, excellent adjective choice and a simile also. Well done, keep writing!
ReplyDeletewell done Emmanuel it was really good i liked the part when you said the fish had pink skin black eyes with a dot. from Jamie
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