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Friday 27 September 2013

The Dangerous Legs by Jessica


Dear readers we inform you that there is a deadly man eater on the loose! Watch out when walking round, this enormous object will gobble you up and won’t take its time. This freaky monster was last seen at Poverest Primary, people living round the area have described this monster as terrifying, with disturbing eyes that follow you till you’re dead. So please take this as a warning. Stay indoors. Keep your children inside. Do not let them out. PLEASE SPREED THE NEWS IT ERGENT THAT EVERYONE KNOW! TAKE THIS AS A WARNING!

It could be you!
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown28 September 2013 at 08:58

    Excellent report Jessica. Good adjectives and short sentences to persuade your reader.

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  2. Miss Travers (Team 100WC)30 September 2013 at 15:40

    This is a fabulous 100 word challenge Jessica, well done! I can imagine it being read out by a newsreader on the evening news. I would certainly stay indoors if I heard your warning!

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