“Hello and welcome to your intimate
doom players...” the voice chuckled,”you will be put up to almost undefeatable
trials. The winner will take a step towards freedom, the loser? You’ll find out
soon enough...”
I was in there with Swarley Grey, the
trickster, Natasha Fraunk, the snooty chic, loads of other teenagers, and then
me. I was Brooklyn High, and I hoped I’d survive...
Tuesdays challenge was finding our
way across the water pit using bread. Yeah, bread. Seriously?
I finally found out what happens to
the loser! They take a trip up the stairway of heaven... Now the next challenge
is up and I had to stop writing.
I lost the challenge and then I saw a
bright light. That’s why I’m dead.
Fantastic use of speech and excellently punctuated. Another fantastic account Millie. I'm very impressed.
ReplyDeleteTuesday's challenge would need an apostrophe because the challenge belongs to Tuesday.
You have such a great imagination Millie - a potential author in the making. Keep this up and you will go far in life - remember me when you are a millionaire! Mrs. Wheller
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