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Friday 27 September 2013

Man Eating Monster by Heather


We have been informed of a man eating monster in South Manhattan, working its way towards Europe. We have recently discovered that our wicked, blood-thirsty monster is capable of breathing in water therefore there is nothing stopping him from reaching with his vice grip the rest of humanity.

 
Causing 57 gruesome, grisly killings and 763 injured and thousands of destroyed homes and buildings this monster is the ultimate master of destruction. Will he leave our race in ruins? Will that thing drive humanity to its grave? Or will someone rise up against. I doubt it bye ,bye report by heather
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5 comments:

  1. Unknown28 September 2013 at 08:39

    Great descriptive language Heather. Good alliteration and use of questions to really get the reader thinking.

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  2. Dr Rodgers (Team 100wc)29 September 2013 at 09:21

    Heather, that's a gripping account, I'd be worried if I heard it one the news. Remember the capital letter for you own name.

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  3. Anonymous3 October 2013 at 02:39

    This is terrifying! Fortunately you have warned the people of Europe that disaster is on the way; let's hope they are able to find an effective defense before the monster reaches these shores!
    The way you use questions to build suspense at the end is superb.

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  4. Anonymous3 October 2013 at 02:40

    Hi Heather great use of describing words Heather I really enjoyed it Well Done!

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  5. Anonymous3 October 2013 at 02:43

    Fantastic description Heather, i like how you ask questions to the reader and I can't wait for more.

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